I have only one thought about doing maintenance to that quest. Here it is.
While talking to Mr. Tillsworth, the camera should center on him when he says, "Hmm... let's see here. Sky Gar fins. Can't help you there, mate, that's rationed, that is!", & "Prunes? I'm a fishmonger, friend. We've no prunes here. You'll want to talk to Mr. Snodgrass: runs his own fruit shop, he does.". Also, his name is a bit too close, "Mr.Tillsworth", so move "Tillsworth" by a space, & the italics are grammar mistakes I've spotted.